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Location: East Coast , Canada
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It is better to be the slave of ones own ideas. Than to be a slave, to a Master, created by the mind of another.- More 's original sayings :)
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I found the bass drum single beat got monotunous & it was a relief when it stopped. For your frst try I liked this piece. When the single repetitive drum starts up again it is ok for a short bit & then it starts to overpower everything else.
So nice job on this & sorry if my personal opinion on the drums ticks you off.
Author's Response:
That's alright, I have a single track mind and my focus was making sure I could get an organized piece together, build up the song properly and end it dramatically. Your comment is a relief for me if that is the main issue and not the other sounds.
I appreciate it greatly, better to know what I'm doing wrong rather than get a bad score and not know why!
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That was pretty good.
I thought it sounded well done, not over mixed by any means.
My only complaint is it was too short.
good luck
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes it is a short song, I uploaded it thinking it would be a good "main menu" theme to a flash submission. This track is the opener to my CD for my solo project, and it has higher quality than my other submissions. I might upload another song from this CD, and it will definately be longer.
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but I made sure I listened all the way through & I must say I did like it .
If I had to pick what I would like more for this, it would be some clean sax solo/ with maybe acoustic accompanying it.
but that's just a personal thing
Nice job
Author's Response:
cheers bro,
maybe i'll do an extra special remix just for you!!!!!
;ped
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To me... I was listening to this and some words just kind of popped into my head.
I'm running away
And leaving today
I'm Jupiter bound
leaving you , on the ground
There's nothing to say
'Cause I'm running away
yes, running away, running away
................
Odd, for me anyway, the song very repettive but catchy.
I voted a pass for your submission.
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But the almost vocal part of it... I find disconcerting. Its like I can't quite hear the words being used, but I'm catching something.
But it is really short & repetitive, maybe if there was more to it I would probably score it higher.
Author's Response:
I did a little part of a music. I''ve decided to finish it, so it will be less repetitive. And I hope that I'll score higher, like you said. Thanks 4 the advice,
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